I received some really nice comments on this poem. People seemed to enjoy reading it and were able to interpret its meaning. It's like, a real, grown-up poem! So, I think it is done, for now. Can't see any places to tweak...
It is kind of strange - like walking away from a painting when you could keep adding strokes forever. I am starting to think about building a collection, though, and what that entails. The idea of putting poems together in a thoughtful way, looking at them in terms of their themes, etc. and putting THAT together and calling it a work. It is fun to think about.
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